This is the traceback section, here people can contribute towards upgrading the current chapter that is released, for example, when you play through the first chapter of the game, and enough to the point you feel it can be better, post here what you feel could be added to make the game much better and such, things would include expanding on the character conversations all the way to looks of the game, basically it could be about anything, try to be serious here since I’m looking to see how this new system works.
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Chapter 01 V.2:
- Graphic Contrast for image, BG and avatars.
- Text fixing V.2
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To contribute just type your information in the comments section down below. all of this new information made with the team and the public can be implemented into a second version of chapter 01 and will continue until the game is near perfection.
I have something to say regarding the character’s face in the textbox
Try looking at this> http://a.imageshack.us/img525/4898/nodakun.jpg
Shouldn’t you remove the background from the face by cutting it? It looks awkward.
It is also preferable if you adjust its contrast so it would match with the textbox and the surroundings. The same also goes with the character sprites and background image.
I see what you mean, I’ll get round to working on those right now, thanks for the information, quality will improve on this, hmm as for character avatars I may need to get rid of them if people find them annoying/awkward.
Nah, I don’t think it’s a good idea. In my opinion, the character sprites are pretty dull. So having the character avatar is a great help for maintaining the game’s atmosphere.
It would’ve been great if you have someone to draw character sprites from scratch. With various poses and expressions.
The issue I had at the start was finding someone to do so, however I will be working on stuff like that in the meantime.
again thanks for the useful advice, like last time I’ll try to work on all of these issues/upgrades in the future.
I found some minor spelling errors.
It’s not really obvious since I didn’t notice it the first time I played.
well it’s useful you told me, just point out where so I can fix it for the later versions of the visual novel.
Besides some spelling errors that were mentioned above, I can’t keep myself from wondering why a ‘normal’, not-a-part-of-SSS high school student has a gun and a set of grenades.
Also, when I went through the sleep-and-stab path, the main character apparently knew that there was a stabbing incident (I look over to my side to see the person who was stabbed earlier sleeping), even though he didn’t witness the event.